Ha!ku
- Yael Saar
- Sep 13
- 1 min read
Updated: Sep 27
by the numbers (from the TCPL writing workshop from Hospicare, Ithaca with Clair Jones, September 13, 2025) The snarling clawed things in my chest wrote this haiku
with their inside voice (17)
and: the recommended 17 syllable count is enough
for now (15)
a pendulum of needs autonomy & structure well, AND is better than OR (20)
agency + economy
come together in art, more like this, please, in life (16)
with sounds to spare each little poems is making me smile (14)
Ha! instead of grabbing extra sounds per poem I'm stringing a garland (17)
See what I did there?
if so, please honk or wave
show me you see me (16)
marveling at how many english words are monosyllabic (last one is 5, lol!) (15)
writing: freeing, delicious, free. why don't i do it more often? (16)

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